This is a mock-up of the title page of this comic. It's here so I can reserve the title. I have a 24 page script and have done the thunmbnail layouts of the story. I'm still working on my art skills so updates will be a long time coming. I deleted the concept art pages because they contained spoilers. Unfortunately I also had to delete the nice comments by chris-tar and fallopiancrusader with them. If you want to see my skills develop, check out my other comic, Dear World. Thanks folks!